Beyond This Window

…is a whole world, waiting…

Poem: Closed

Author’s Note: I don’t usually write poems. I am pretty sure I’m not very good at them. I’ve never really had a good hand with them, but I was sitting in my car and it came to me.


I can hear them,
His sweet words and promises,
Love swelling over me, enveloping me,
I close my eyes.

I can smell it,
The musk of his cologne,
Arms wrapped tightly as I rest against his chest,
I close my eyes.

I can taste him,
His tongue gently dancing with mine,
Sweet and innocent, the first meeting of trembling lips,
I close my eyes.

I can feel them,
Hands slow and deliberate,
Strokes spurring me, edging toward shuddering release,
I close my eyes.

I can see him,
His back turned, walking away,
Heart broken and heavy as tears fight through,
I close my eyes.

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3 Comments»

  slpmartin wrote @

Well…I would say that this is a very good poem with excellent imagery…so don’t give up on writing poems…thanks!

  lilythompson wrote @

Thanks! I really appreciate that.

  kristina wrote @

Can’t write a poem? WWWHHHAAA?

The great things about poems is that you can express things that lack sentence structure. It’s capturing feelings through imagery… the whole “show and don’t tell” syndrome. Again, you can’t get better without trying and practicing :D

And researching! Read books on poetry and stories to help with your writing. Studying how other authors put there things together is wonderful in learning how to create your own unique style. :)


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